Writing a whole 200 page book based on the description, a self-written chapter, a 8X3 TOC and some anecdotes is not the most professional approach. There should be other book reerences, author notes and memos on specific sections, any specific inputs by each chapter. It is such a great platform, but these simple fixes need to be incorporated so that the initial draft can be consumable. Otherwise it is a lot of generalities and takes more work to edit than writing ground up.